cashew: Minako's transformation pen (SailorMoon // pen is mightier)
a furtive pygmy ([personal profile] cashew) wrote2020-12-12 08:02 pm

Ugh, fixing passive voice

I'm trying to apply the writing advice about avoiding passive voice and...wow, my brain feels like it's about to explode. I mean, I get that I just need to keep practicing and over time I will get in a new habit, but is it ever hard. Urgh.

/complaining

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